Had this one saved and I finally got to it. I dig it I get major AM vibes. like It's precursor or something hahah. My biggest critisim is entirely subjective but I would of loved teeny context clues within the dialog that built more on the world. You had like the company name and stuff, but to hint at its purpose earlier would of been dope maybe things that sow our doubt in Corey while reading.
Just stuff like that. But like i said, major I have no mouth and I must scream energy. I love that.
I'm super happy you enjoyed it! And, to be compared to such a classic piece is wonderful, especially coming from a talented writer likely you. Thank you
Had this one saved and I finally got to it. I dig it I get major AM vibes. like It's precursor or something hahah. My biggest critisim is entirely subjective but I would of loved teeny context clues within the dialog that built more on the world. You had like the company name and stuff, but to hint at its purpose earlier would of been dope maybe things that sow our doubt in Corey while reading.
Just stuff like that. But like i said, major I have no mouth and I must scream energy. I love that.
I'm super happy you enjoyed it! And, to be compared to such a classic piece is wonderful, especially coming from a talented writer likely you. Thank you
Sheesh, that was good
Thank you! Always happy when someone enjoys a story of mine