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Spencer D.W.'s avatar

I dug it. I think it could use with more space to breathe in-between things. The absurdity of it was greatly interwoven with the horror.

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Ashley T.K.'s avatar

Thabk you very much! I do see myself moving quickly from one piece of action to the next. I'll work on that with my upcoming pieces!

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Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Nice reading on the social! Your voice really lends to the voice of your stories I believe. It was a fun experience and the narrator’s character is shown well. Also agree with Erica about the “wait I don’t remember why” line. It’s eery.

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Ashley T.K.'s avatar

Thank you! The positive reception to the social was fantastic to see. It makes me happy to see this community come together for things like this, and even happier to be a part of that community. Hopefully they get you on the next one

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Blace Alcock's avatar

I missed out on your reading, but i did sit down after to read this. It’s great stuff!

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Ashley T.K.'s avatar

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sorry you couldn’t make the stream, it was so much fun

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Shawn Brooks's avatar

Excellent read

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𝔪𝔞𝔯𝔲𝔢𝔩𝔞 ₊˚✩⊹. ♡'s avatar

Omg this fits right in this Halloween season ‼️

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Ashley T.K.'s avatar

Thank you! There's more genres I want to tackle soon, but I figured I could keep the horror train going until the end of the month

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