This was very well written. Its not my usually cup of tea but it kept me interested throughout. largely due to relating heavily to a lot that was happening. the depiction of this volatile relationship was very well executed. Think my only ctitism would be a tiny bit more dialog between the two. and I say a tiny bit because I think less is more In a story like this. if that makes sense at all! haha
Thank you very much. I'm happy you were able to enjoy it despite being a different genre than your usual. The dialog was difficult to get out on this one, but I think you're right that it probably would have helped the piece
This was very well written. Its not my usually cup of tea but it kept me interested throughout. largely due to relating heavily to a lot that was happening. the depiction of this volatile relationship was very well executed. Think my only ctitism would be a tiny bit more dialog between the two. and I say a tiny bit because I think less is more In a story like this. if that makes sense at all! haha
Thank you very much. I'm happy you were able to enjoy it despite being a different genre than your usual. The dialog was difficult to get out on this one, but I think you're right that it probably would have helped the piece