I loved this. Especially the roots growing through my ribs line. Something I’ve found comfort in too, but also this made me think of Hell more than anything. This is the kind of torment that would fit. An unbearable nothing. Great piece.
Thank you so much, I'm happy ypu enjoyed it! Originally, I considered titling it "Hell" or "Athiest Hell," but wasn’t sure if those titles have the pull I wanted
From a skeleton to another, yeah, I know the itch, and you conveyed it well.
Jesus, the start alone had me wincing.
Always good to hear my writing made someone feel something. Thank you!
I loved this. Especially the roots growing through my ribs line. Something I’ve found comfort in too, but also this made me think of Hell more than anything. This is the kind of torment that would fit. An unbearable nothing. Great piece.
Thank you so much, I'm happy ypu enjoyed it! Originally, I considered titling it "Hell" or "Athiest Hell," but wasn’t sure if those titles have the pull I wanted